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    dots Submission Name: My Holedots
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    Author: Desser
    ASL Info:    20
    Elite Ratio:    3.83 - 89/95/44
    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 178
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    Bytes: 619



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    dotsMy Holedots
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    I sit in this hole
    A hole so small
    Yet it fits me perfectly.

    It surrounds me to my peak
    Covering my body
    And clouding my mind
    From what I must see.

    I cannot seem to reach out
    And nothing will grasp me
    Nothing wants to take me
    Nothing could care less about me.

    This hole is my home
    I cannot get out
    No one can get in.
    That 's how it will be
    Until my life takes lead.

    So I sit and wait
    Wait for my turn leave
    Maybe to fly
    Maybe to die.





    Submitted on 2006-03-01 16:09:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Wow! Your peice really is powerful in itself. i really loved how you worded it, i think you've picked the perfect ones. great job! I hope to read more of your works in the future.
    | Posted on 2006-03-01 00:00:00 | by kiki402 | [ Reply to This ]
      A little to who is me....
    but it seems as if you know this, too
    "That 's how it will be
    Until my life takes lead."
    and yet in your poem you seem to be waiting for something...whether it leads you to fly or die as you put it...
    interesting reflection of self worth or self worthlessness... if nothing else...
    Iwill go read some more of your work..
    Swanne
    | Posted on 2006-03-10 00:00:00 | by Swanne | [ Reply to This ]



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