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    dots Submission Name: Good To See You Againdots
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    Author: CaptainRogers
    ASL Info:    25/M/Fredericton
    Elite Ratio:    3.13 - 14/15/8
    Words: 233
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 193
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1298



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       Just Let Me Know How It Makes You Feel.


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    dotsGood To See You Againdots
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    I heard it through a friend of a friend
    that you were back in town
    its been so long since i have seen you last
    i wonder if you would ever want to
    want to get together with a kid like me again

    you see its been so long
    so long since i could stare into those eyes so blue
    i only vaguely remember the way in which you used to trap me
    that innocent laughter which flowed from within you
    those lips so ready to be pressed against
    i cant say i have been struggling without you here
    but i could say i have been waiting for you to return
    because so much had been left behind
    i want to know if that is where it should stay

    shall we let the past rest and fade away
    or shall we open a new chapter and call it "the beginning"
    it isnt that i fell in love with your long silky hair
    and it isnt even that your voice spoke within my dreams
    the simple things like just knowing you are here

    i heard it through a friend of a friend
    that you were back in town
    they also told me you were asking about me
    so where does this new beginning start
    and where is it that we lay the past to rest


    -Kris Wilson




    Submitted on 2006-03-01 20:53:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      That is absolutely delicious. Man alive. Seriously, I felt that poem. I would love to read more. I'm going to go and pontificate on this for a bit. Good job.
    | Posted on 2006-03-01 00:00:00 | by Mr_Eff | [ Reply to This ]
      made me shiver, as always...
    left me with a sense of longing.
    left me wanting more, again, as always.
    you know how its done.
    | Posted on 2006-03-01 00:00:00 | by obscureskies | [ Reply to This ]



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