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    dots Submission Name: alcoholics anonymousdots
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    Author: strike three
    ASL Info:    26/m/ethiopia
    Elite Ratio:    3.07 - 32/39/18
    Words: 149
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 176
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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       ever had a bad drinking day that u don't wanna talk about?


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    dotsalcoholics anonymousdots
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    The others didn’t see him come
    I ignored him, leaned back sippin rum
    Like black spells smoke condensed to form
    Random hurt pieces united became strong.

    In spotlight, the VIP of alone
    My table empty when others strong
    His glass empty he needs to get more
    He guided me to the bar to make him strong.

    Repeat please he had me say
    The bar tender looked at me sway
    Perk up u bastard from inside he said
    Bar tender smiled, you need to go away

    The others saw him, they looked at me
    Smashed the empty glass shattered and free
    Wide eyed audience was in for a treat
    Before I knew it he took over me.

    The clown is back security please.
    Give him five minutes let him please.
    The show is over, what a freak!
    Throw him out onto the street!




    Submitted on 2006-03-01 23:31:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      not a bad piece i must admit, i get the feeling this didnt really come from the heart though and is more of a planned writing, writings are so much stronger when there is passion and feeling behind them.
    | Posted on 2006-03-02 00:00:00 | by BonafiedRarity | [ Reply to This ]



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