well i see what you mean.. if you want to i would really appriciate it if you would help me and yeah.. things do make me feel like Im going to bring it all to the end.. and yeah... so if you can help me i would really appriciate it... bjafreak
great job on this, thats the way life is...you never know what you really have until you've lost it...the hardest part...learning you can't get it back. when i was reading it, i couldn't stop, you did well. but the bad part is, i'd like to hear more about the story...what happened?
Perfectly paced. The self-analayzing, yet not apologizing for it. That's refreshing. I think this is a really well done piece of life. Fact, or fiction it rings with the bittersweet way reality misleads us. If that makes sense
i loved it. Your honesty but yet no regret for what happened. I found inspiring. It was sweet but not sappy. It made me think of an old relationship in which was one like this. i wish i could have been as honest as you at the time.
'I hid myself under layers of lace and mascara and asked you to let me live your dreams'
that verse really spoke to me. It's so often we hide our true selfs in fear of being hurt, but 9/10 times that is the cause of us getting hurt in the end. And when we do realize what we're doing it's oh so late. And then there's the times that we're just there because we don't want to be alone. I love this poem. It says so much, and every reader is going to take something different from it.
First of all I hate love poems! BUT yours is not an average love poem and I absolutely love it.I love the reality of it and the honesty you brought to it. It is hard to admit when you allow yourself to be bamboozeled by admiration but this does in my interpretation an excellent job of portraying the one that was benefitting from the attention and the honesty of just not feeling it.Kudos..excellent write.