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    dots Submission Name: Innerdots
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    Author: BonafiedRarity
    ASL Info:    18/m/Australia
    Elite Ratio:    2.33 - 11/18/17
    Words: 162
    Class/Type: Misc/Love
    Total Views: 166
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 932



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       this is the inner me


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    dotsInnerdots
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    Everyone has an inner fear, a fear that
    they will never find true love, or a fear
    that they will never find true love again,
    love is a twisted thing, and everyone will
    one day experience it, a person doesnt
    love a someone because of what they do
    or who they are, you'll find the reason
    you love someone is because they love you,
    and they want to be with you unconditionally.
    and they love you because you feel the same.

    it's a scary thought. Deep down i know i'll find
    someone who is right for me, one day...but even to
    think that i may not find that person, is
    my inner fear, and it scares me, and this
    is the reason i care so much, this is the
    reason why i love my family so much, my friends
    so much, my pets so much, my life so much.
    just to make sure my love doesn't go to waste.




    Submitted on 2006-03-02 09:37:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This is beautiful
    I too know exactly what you are speaking of
    I surrond myself with so much love from friends and family that I do not need a relationship as in a romance to bring me love
    Every relationship ive seen has always ended in pain
    I trully like this
    Your style of writing is a little knew to me but the message screams out loud and clear
    Great Write
    God Bless
    Ron

    And welcome to Elite Skills I hope this site brings you all the joy it has brought me
    Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
    Thank You
    Ron
    | Posted on 2006-03-02 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      omg!!!!! i cant beleive that now i found someone who feels exactly the way i feel most of the time.... well i guess you are the one who can understand, now... thank you so much for sharing, this is so good and it's nice to know someone knows how you feel.... it's just a reflection of your innerself, bravo!!!
    j
    | Posted on 2006-03-02 00:00:00 | by ParLon | [ Reply to This ]



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