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    dots Submission Name: Today I did it.dots
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    Author: strike three
    ASL Info:    26/m/ethiopia
    Elite Ratio:    3.07 - 32/39/18
    Words: 146
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 155
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    dotsToday I did it.dots
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    Today I finally did it, I finally let it go
    I can do whatever, you’re not an obstacle
    The pain is gone and I’m on track
    It wasn’t easy but now I’m back
    Again I’m happy all alone
    I don’t care now that you’re gone

    Today I finally did it, I finally smiled again
    This time it was from the heart and not forced in pain
    You’d turned my world to black and white
    Now there’s color and things look right
    I’m happy that you broke my heart
    And left me with a fresh new start

    Today I finally did it, I’ve let love come in
    It led me into happiness and I’m singing
    For all the memories that we had
    I have new ones, yours were bad
    I am happy that you were there
    To show me for what I don’t care




    Submitted on 2006-03-02 12:32:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      great job on this, break ups are a [censored] but also can seem to free you. your words are true and well written...i like the rhyming, good job. well good luck to you and your new free life...
    | Posted on 2006-03-02 00:00:00 | by suicidalacts72 | [ Reply to This ]
      pretty hardcore. I really like this write because I have had those feelings through a breakup. I thought you expressed your emotion well. Great work.

    Candale-Switch
    | Posted on 2006-03-03 00:00:00 | by Candale-Switch | [ Reply to This ]
      this is a great piece that shows very accuratel the stages of getting back on your feet after heart break...I want my sister to read it...her name is Raivn and she is on this site...poor soul, she is still recovering from her own heart break. but this was great...

    peace
    Jazmine Mystique
    | Posted on 2006-03-06 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]



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