Description: Just trying to get a response on it :)
Dying while Living -------------------------------------------
In my mind
That is where
Truth and false collide
In my tears
Its where all my secrets hide
I want to go
but i'd like to stay
I want to sun
but I need to hide
Two years ago
Two hearts combined
Now one is hidden
Locked Away
Where no one can find
Now in my head is where
I lay
Im choking on my thoughts
Im constantly slipping away
Im dying while living
this peice really made me think, and it was really good. it was a little short, yet it still got a message through. cant wait to read some more of your work.
Submission Name: Dying while Living
