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    dots Submission Name: From a Moledots
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    Author: Dave S Skinner
    Elite Ratio:    3.65 - 15/18/11
    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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       With a little help from a very furry creature


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    dotsFrom a Moledots
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    With just a little help from a Mole. The smallest of creatures, filling the gap, so unlikely.

    Burrowing underneath it all, extracting only the necessary. Sealing the cracks and moving on.

    No super-being, yet not ordinary. Blind, yet with exceptional eyesight. Needing not to know it all, yet precise in its navigation.

    A remarkable thing to think about. Even such small things to need to be thought of every now and then.

    The trust placed in such a creature places a great weight on its burrow, yet it holds firm.

    Supported by its feeling.




    Submitted on 2006-03-02 17:10:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I really love pieces that get you thinking...even about the little things in life lol :)...welcome to elite! I will look forward to reading more of submissions :)
    | Posted on 2006-03-02 00:00:00 | by stormyskies | [ Reply to This ]
      such a cute poem, yet it's insightful and deep, simple yet complex, it covers so much ground. I love it. A mole ... interesting choice. Keep it up!
    :)
    | Posted on 2006-03-03 00:00:00 | by Psychohenry32 | [ Reply to This ]
      heh. Moles, i never would have thought about that in writing. I'm usually cursing when it comes to them. I think you bring out something beautiful about them, thats T.ight. A good write and a fun read. : )

    Candale-Switch
    | Posted on 2006-03-02 00:00:00 | by Candale-Switch | [ Reply to This ]
      i love moles...this is the only poem iv read about it i really liked the third line and first its so funny the way u descirbed it (it being the whole big picture not just the mole)

    Trevor...~
    | Posted on 2006-03-09 00:00:00 | by goomaster03 | [ Reply to This ]



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