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    dots Submission Name: So Sweetdots
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    Author: Mr_Eff
    Elite Ratio:    3.29 - 61/62/39
    Words: 480
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 194
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 3069



    Description:
       Some days call for some straight up battle type rhymes. This would be one of those days.


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    dotsSo Sweetdots
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    I'm ultra magnetic, and far from pathetic
    Though far from magnetic, if you listen dyslexic
    So sweet with this mic, it fucks up the diabetics
    Turn chronic hip hop, into a global epidemic
    Commiting verbal malpractice, with no use for anesthetic
    When I kill an mc I feel bad, but don't regret it
    If I let you live, you're soul's become indebted
    I will call in my favor, so you'd better not forget it
    Indepent mind frame, energetic rhyme game
    Do this til I'm dead, even if I never find fame
    Just stay rugged like Buddy Lee, essence of what cruddy be
    Turn the newest wave of rappers, into an effing bloody sea
    Yo, that's funny G, nobody's capable of running me
    If you give me five seconds, I can promise you'll be done in three
    That's E double F, for when I'm feeling extra nasty
    That happens when a chump attempts to razz me
    Your ego makes you sass me, you're a talking bitch like Lassie
    If I backtracked backward, back to the begining you won't pass me

    You can scream player hater, I'm more like a player savior
    Here to check you and correct you of your weak-willed behavior
    Finding real hip hop's a real life "where's waldo"
    Mtv gangsters playing the next Tupac to follow
    I know this can seem like a tough pill to swallow
    But, most these signed clowns whole center is hollow
    I'm the type to approach a battle like a street fighter
    Searching out the best to challange, just to get my skills tighter
    If your dj isn't scratching, he's just a dick rider
    So sweet with this mic, I'll rot your teeth if you're a biter
    In case you haven't noticed, I'm a writer and reciter
    The most venomous creature since the funnell web spider
    Why'd you bring your bitch there's no way I'd invite her
    Man, I was talking to your girl, you're the bitch that's beside her
    Silly named, half-assed gangsters in the studio
    Half you cat's aren't even half as hard as Coolio
    We know he isn't hard, I'll break you down to tiny shards
    As I enjoy dealing with you, like a deck of nudie cards
    Why are you in music, if you're a pistol packing demon?
    Even got your momma wishing she'd swallowed your daddy's semen
    If you have to, borrow my pad, and my pen
    My mind and my dictionary just to help you comprehend
    All the metaphores and similies, the american civil liberties
    Union is on my case, cause I'm filled with hate when killing G's
    Fuck it, I'm through. This is a bullshit game
    Lame cat's with wack raps all sound the fucking same
    That's a triple stamp on my mom's, I swear to god my word is bond
    Drench these fuckers with my piss, drown them all on golden pond.




    Submitted on 2006-03-02 17:42:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Nice punchlines
    "That happens when a chump attempts to razz me
    Your ego makes you sass me, you're a talking [censored] like Lassie"
    Creative.
    "That's a triple stamp on my mom's, I swear to god my word is bond
    Drench these [censored]ers with my piss, drown them all on golden pond."
    this was a nice ending line.
    | Posted on 2006-03-02 00:00:00 | by SinCeer05 | [ Reply to This ]



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