Minimalist poetry bows to you when you write. I enjoyed this write thoroughly, though short, it informed me that saying things in the fewest amount of words possible is probably the most effective way of saying them!
Well ,"ain't that the truth"; It gives me an odd but certain pleasure to watch someone squirm with guilt when their own lies entangle them in that web.You just said that but with more punch and less words. Silver
Once again another wonderful write by my dear m'lady cuddle. long time, well first of all excellent write i love the lies and they come back around to make you tell the truth because all the guilt inside the flower watered it with dew and we all know what happens when water feeds flowers they grow and bloom and whatever is inside of it must come out. Secondly, i hope to read more of your stuff.