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    dots Submission Name: Circle of Liesdots
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    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 17
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsCircle of Liesdots
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    The circle of lies
    again reached its origin
    making truth bud
    dewed with guilty drops.





    Submitted on 2004-05-03 01:28:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Minimalist poetry bows to you when you write. I enjoyed this write thoroughly, though short, it informed me that saying things in the fewest amount of words possible is probably the most effective way of saying them!
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    Azuire
    | Posted on 2007-02-03 00:00:00 | by Azuire | [ Reply to This ]
      Well ,"ain't that the truth"; It gives me an odd but certain pleasure to watch someone squirm with guilt when their own lies entangle them in that web.You just said that but with more punch and less words. Silver
    | Posted on 2004-05-04 00:00:00 | by Silverdog | [ Reply to This ]
      Reminds me of gossip. People say terrible things and it always comes back around to the source. When truth prevails and the guilty party is exposed, it is a wonderful thing!
    | Posted on 2004-05-04 00:00:00 | by angela~ | [ Reply to This ]
      Can I laugh even if this was serious... This is so real that it's just a yah I know that sucker type of write. Only you left out the "Baby, I'm sorry" BS and just made it dew.
    | Posted on 2004-05-03 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]
      True, so very true. Thats a perfect way to say What goes around comes around. A little lie does come back to its owner
    | Posted on 2004-05-03 00:00:00 | by Gop | [ Reply to This ]
      Once again another wonderful write by my dear m'lady cuddle. long time, well first of all excellent write i love the lies and they come back around to make you tell the truth because all the guilt inside the flower watered it with dew and we all know what happens when water feeds flowers they grow and bloom and whatever is inside of it must come out. Secondly, i hope to read more of your stuff.

    Semper Fidelis,
    Christopher
    | Posted on 2004-05-03 00:00:00 | by Soulraven | [ Reply to This ]
      "What comes around goes around" spoken with eloquence...I loved this!
    | Posted on 2004-05-03 00:00:00 | by Emerging Soul | [ Reply to This ]
      "what goes around comes around" indeed! this is ezquisite. very short, very eloquent and to the point! funny, i just wrote something with dewdrops in it, too! perfect minimalism, dumplin!
    | Posted on 2004-05-03 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]


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