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    dots Submission Name: 1984dots
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    Author: Mr_Eff
    Elite Ratio:    3.29 - 61/62/39
    Words: 561
    Class/Type: Lyrics/
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       I wrote this with a friend. I put his parts in here as well. If you pay attention, you'll be able to tell the parts that are mine. It's just a bit of angst.


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    Kill the presdent! I can't believe I said that, cause my mic is tapped
    By the men in black, following me around for years like baby fat
    You can't persuade me that this country isn't run by shady cats
    When plainly facts should show a moron what they're playing at
    And their facts are fiction, on their brainwashing mission
    So I'm digging out the microchip embedded in my head to listien
    Subliminal transmission pumped through our televisions
    Pouring shampoo in our minds, cause now it cleans, and conditions
    And we're conditioned and program to listen only to the man
    Led to believe we have free will, but it's just his master plan
    Peeking through the blinds, because I know they're always clocking
    Mi Familia don't mean shit when it's Big Brother that comes knocking
    I'm getting spinal tapped, and wire tapped
    Even programmed for this rap with the propaganda crap
    Take away the 4th amendment, calling it a public service
    Orwell wouldn't be surprised, but I bet you he'd be nervous

    We're just citizen kanes, with prosthetic brains
    Engrained with programs to sustain a plain existance in vein

    The police state ain't so great you see, know why G?
    Cavity searches on the street will fuck you up rectally
    If you have no id you'll see
    You're more suspicious than OJ in a bronco with AC

    I want to disappear like a human chamealeon
    For every dream granted, they sacrifice a million
    You wonder how I can be convinced who's the villian
    Well, my dad survived the war, going to Vietnam is what killed him
    With world war four, and more of the same in store
    Things aint been the same since they outlawed being poor

    Like C.H.U.D. we're driven underground, cannibalistic human dwellers all around
    Donner parties are abound

    Ready to make you into breakfast, lunch or dinner
    But I'm thinner than an ethiopian marathon winner
    Since the soylent green rations stopped
    You couldn't get a pork chop of my skinny body, bottom to top

    This is what happens when Bush comes to shove
    American dreams have uncle sam with a freddy kruger glove
    And what about those folks, who get broke like egg yolks
    Then become the punchline of uncle sams jokes
    CNN programs don't talk about them.
    Poor broke and lonely men, women and children
    Who before their llfe begins, already paying for the sins
    Of their forefathers, while more martyrs take it on the chin
    Then the sould gets crushed, that's why I'm saying "fuck this bunch"
    Of bastard who took control with a colonial sucker punch
    The peak of human civilization happened way before this nation
    Had perfected the art of the long distance creamation
    Hesitation is for the weak, there's sooo much truth in what I speak
    That if we all got together revolution would be chic
    What if our cause had more style than gucci?
    Hoochie mommas would have Che shirts, bra-less, titties hanging loosely
    Fighiting for something real, instead fighting to be fake
    Kens and Barbies on the take get concrete shoes in the lake
    All take and no givin' is how these fuckers have been livin'
    Livid from the fact I can't travel without their supervision
    I guess freedom isn't free, attached is a hefty fee
    Paid by you and me, cementing this abysmal destiny




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      Your lyrics are so well rounded. a lil bit of everything in this write.
    "Fighiting for something real, instead fighting to be fake
    Kens and Barbies on the take get concrete shoes in the lake"
    i liked this line. There were a lot of really good lines
    "Pouring shampoo in our minds, cause now it cleans, and conditions
    And we're conditioned and program to listen only to the man
    Led to believe we have free will, but it's just his master plan"

    These were good..
    | Posted on 2006-05-01 00:00:00 | by SinCeer05 | [ Reply to This ]
      If this is based on the Orwell novel 1984, then i must say i am impressed. Even if it contains elements from the book. The rhyming sceme was brillant, I do believe I had beat in my head as I was reading it. haha! Nicely done
    | Posted on 2006-03-02 00:00:00 | by Phobos | [ Reply to This ]
      That was fun. A ride of truth and media refrences that tell me this person pays attention to everything and has every right to be pissed off. "They outlawed being poor" You represented the ills of greed without railing against the corporation. Nice, fresh images. It's a rant, but a fun rant and worth the read.
    | Posted on 2006-03-02 00:00:00 | by Spare Change | [ Reply to This ]
      i'm am really impressed by this. great job even though i feel dissapointed for some reason by this but whatever. it was great.
    -kiddow
    | Posted on 2006-03-03 00:00:00 | by the nerdbomb | [ Reply to This ]



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