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    dots Submission Name: When I ponderdots
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    Author: Soulraven
    ASL Info:    31/Male/Illinois
    Elite Ratio:    4.05 - 510/481/142
    Words: 199
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
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    dotsWhen I ponderdots
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    When I ponder upon my leisure, reading and writing. I think myself an abusive man to oneself. For I seek knowledge that I can not fully understand or to much for me to retain. So, I abuse my wisdom with abundance that if even by age shall leak or just by mere mass will never be applied to my life. Obdurate is me who ravenously seeks omniscience but lacking unison with id and soul will retire far short of elysian knowledge. In plight, erudite-hood is and illusion I shall keep melanic to all entities in a larmoyant effort to imitate 'elan. The notion it self tout among advocates but my animosity for anthropologist thought generates what minutiae adroit yet veriloquent of agnosy and my lack of omniscience leaving satisdiction by me.


    obdurate- stubborn, hardened, inflexible
    omniscience- infinite understanding, knowing all things
    id- part of mind thought to be source of psychic energy
    elysian- blissful, delightful
    melanic- black, dark
    larmoyant- tearful
    'elan- spirited self-assurance
    tout- Praise highly
    animosity- strong feeling of dislike
    anthropologist- worship of human as god
    adroit- skillful
    veriloquent- speaking truth
    agnosy- ignorance, especially ignorance shared by the whole human race
    satisdiction- enough said




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      i dont understand how out of 120 people that have viewed this only one has commented... id ont get it.. but this is good, i like it.. the dictionary thing at the end was pretty helpful.. lol good write
    danielle
    | Posted on 2005-08-07 00:00:00 | by sacred_tears | [ Reply to This ]


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