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    dots Submission Name: Is this me?dots
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    Author: frenchie_inlove
    ASL Info:    13, f
    Elite Ratio:    2.43 - 6/12/8
    Words: 114
    Class/Type: Misc/Me
    Total Views: 214
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 772



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    dotsIs this me?dots
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    Is this me?
    looking back in the mirror
    cracked down the middle
    a suspect inside

    is this me?
    that person who follows
    every step i take
    the shadow thats always there

    is this me?
    the fist pounding inside
    stabbing at every beat
    hurting, forcing me to the ground

    is this me?
    that my friends call frenchie
    with long brown hair
    that flows with deep sorrow

    is this me?
    the loneliness that take over
    that strangles me to my death
    with 1 rose in my left hand

    is this me?
    the person typing
    whos sole so deep
    it stretches for miles

    is ...
    this ...
    me?




    Submitted on 2006-03-02 21:40:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Whoo, another wonderful poem from a 13 year old who has some much potiental. I remember trying to figure out who I was (I still dont think I have) and writing helped. However at 13 I wasnt nearly as good as this. You take common themes and make them interesting to read. No rhyming makes it that much better as well.

    Its a question we ask ourselves everyday, and maybe she might find the answer. This poem is something special,
    | Posted on 2006-03-03 00:00:00 | by Phobos | [ Reply to This ]
      i like the poem but you could also take this a lil more into detail about why your'e wondering this and all about your problems
    | Posted on 2006-03-03 00:00:00 | by Kaila Turley | [ Reply to This ]



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