Veterans of the Snow Wars by mugsy

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Submission Name: Veterans of the Snow Wars dots

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Author:	mugsy
ASL Info:	60/M/Victoria B.C. Can.
Elite Ratio:	4.03 - 129/90/29
Words:	56

Class/Type:	Poetry/Them
Total Views:	283
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	447

Description:
Fantasy memories of a time in Winnipeg, and some discombobulated visions prompted in part by an amber fluid which at the time was supposed to aid digestion and help with my other problem of creating run-on sentences. It did neither.----

Veterans of the Snow Wars dots

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Slush,
The guts of snow
Soft squashed by
A multitude
Host of galoshes,
Thusly shod the
Winter people reside
In the white ice world
Of Winnipeg Manitoba

Bone cold wind blown
Northeners
Cold blue flame folks
Dancing like Northern lights
Flickering Aurora Borealis
Icicles the medals
They hang on their eaves
For recognition....

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This was definilty a cool poem. The only thing that threw me a bit was how you broke up the lines. After the first stanza though, I got used to it. This was definitly original, nice job:)
| Posted on 2006-03-06 00:00:00 | by Glassy Eyed | [ Reply to This ]

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