Description: I love fire. That's the main reason I wrote this one, but it turned into something different. This is about my 7th poem. I think my poems are too straight forward. Please tell me what you think of my poems in general. Thanks!
The Flame -------------------------------------------
It lives to destroy
It destroys to live
A lone warrior
Sign of true power
Dancing in the wind
Wildfire in the veins
They hold eachother
Flame combines in one
Stronger than the first
Light in the darkness
Flame calls for respect
It offers comfort
in the cold darkness
But foolish ones will
burn within their souls
Wildfire in the veins wow thats cool u could like write like those chinese shows where eveything is about like angles and going crazy in the head and fighting with huge ass swords...your very creative and paint a nice picture with your words i think its just the way u throw things together like
Flame calls for respect its almost like your giving it a life like qulity and feeling u could maybe like write one from the eyes of somthing like a rock or water or somthing weird id love to see that...nice job
ah another Pyromaniac so good to know Im not the only one wonderful work and a great peom I love fire and its seem so do you this was a good write with imagery and emotion good work and keep playing with fire
GREAT WRITE! now that, my dear friend, is POETRY! let the words speak for you, let them express emotion, images, and experiences. The imagery in this poem is amazing, I loved the power the words had. They really created a vivid image in my mind. GREAT POEM, KEEP IT UP!
Submission Name: The Flame
