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    dots Submission Name: Reflected detcelfeRdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 29
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 795
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 297



    Description:
       Singin in "IT" rain

    Enjoy this gift we have in now -- smiles on the house - no id required - no limit -- and the whole world says - mahalo - hang loose ES!

    love,peace,joy!

    tif


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    dotsReflected detcelfeRdots
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    When tHE raindrop
    f
    a
    l
    l
    s 2
    Lake *
    "IT"
    s
    e
    e
    self fles(h)

    Reflected detcelfeR

    W
    h
    o
    l
    epiphany




    Submitted on 2006-03-03 12:10:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      all this water's making me thirsty. this is deffinately artistic, and innovative. it's cool. wetness is good, and so is this.
    | Posted on 2006-04-13 00:00:00 | by dismentled | [ Reply to This ]
      I can tell one thing by your poems, tiff.

    WATER
    A
    T
    E
    R

    IS
    S

    WONDERFUL
    O
    N
    D
    E
    R
    F
    U
    L

    I love your poems of water. They all "flow" really well! SPLOOSH!
    | Posted on 2006-04-06 00:00:00 | by manwithnoname | [ Reply to This ]
      This is really lovely. I always enjoy reading your poems and checking out your creativity. You have such a great spirituality and appreciation for life that is very uplifting and admirable. I like how you did the title as a reflection of itself...that is cool. And the message here is one I would expect from you. Live for today and appreciate what you have now. Love life! We never know when our time is up so we gotta enjoy it while we can! I hear ya! Really good prose here! Happy Friday!

    Lorna
    | Posted on 2006-03-03 00:00:00 | by lmz | [ Reply to This ]
      This is really creative
    I love when you make a piece your own
    You really have a knack with Creativity
    IT is Beautiful
    IT carries You
    To all of your dreams
    God Bless
    Ron
    | Posted on 2006-03-03 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      A mere raindrop in a lake.. sees itself reflected whole.
    That sort of says how it is with love.
    When you find "the one".. you can see yourself reflected in their eyes, and their love makes you feel whole.
    I have to admit, it tool me several readings just to get that (lol)..
    I do love the way you bring out a poem.
    You have style

    ~Sandra
    | Posted on 2006-03-08 00:00:00 | by Intricate1 | [ Reply to This ]
      thats really cool it forms a rally nice picture in my mind whats with the simly im new sorry... its cool whats with (h) ...for what ever reson the capital R is really...idk moving i guess it reminded of the one i have featured...idk why but i love this poem
    | Posted on 2006-03-03 00:00:00 | by goomaster03 | [ Reply to This ]
      this is very reflective and smart in away
    in all the posts i've read you are the only one that writes this way

    pretty cool and thanx for your comment
    i posted today my last piece of poetry based on my life
    enjoy and thanx

    best of luck sandman
    aka Tim H
    | Posted on 2006-03-03 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
      Now I suppose this is a prose
    Of how a life should be
    Creative yes and so I guess
    Your heart and spirit's free

    I really enjoyed your write.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2006-03-03 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      

    thanks for reminding us once again of how the light is waiting to consume all of who we are and illumine all we do
    Have fun on your trip to Kentucky and thanks for your note!

    Love,

    Nan
    | Posted on 2006-03-03 00:00:00 | by nansofast | [ Reply to This ]
      This was cute. At first I was like what the? But I'm half asleep now, it's late and I should be in bed. Back to the poem. Very good. I liked the way you set this up. Yes, rain can cleasnse all negativity. You did a fine job with this Tiff.

    Maggie
    | Posted on 2006-03-05 00:00:00 | by Magnolia Steele | [ Reply to This ]
      ok at first i was like what the heck is that??!!
    but in reading it, it's actually very cool.

    i follow the poem as if the words are 'raining' down to the bottom, that's very creative.

    plus the whole poem isn't very clustered with a lot of words. the imagery is there, but with bare essentialness. it paints a simple yet defined picture of you and the rain.

    reading this was definitely a trip. thanks for sharing it.
    | Posted on 2006-03-06 00:00:00 | by onepieces | [ Reply to This ]


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