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    dots Submission Name: Proper Mother Naturedots
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    Author: freak_like_me
    ASL Info:    20/female/Ireland
    Elite Ratio:    4.81 - 120/118/49
    Words: 137
    Class/Type: Misc/
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    dotsProper Mother Naturedots
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    Its down by the river I want to sit
    is it here? where i can watch the blue waters ripple
    and the pirhana's
    and the frog leafs
    down by the river bank

    Mister Green
    I love your aspects. And all your content
    And how you grow so tall
    with all those colourful vitamins that you eat
    The smell so scentful
    So fresh
    And the animals, resting
    And as they just be what god created as mans alternative
    Id love another day by the river

    And mother nature with her branches so strong
    They curl their skinny arms around the thin air
    In the solid summer heat
    Oh how I love to see
    These coours woven so correctly
    Like those greens
    Blues
    Yellows
    And 8 tone browns

    I long for another day by the river




    Submitted on 2006-03-03 14:42:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      i like how you incorporate a few things of nature into this...the colors, the smells, the image of "mother nature", and the animals.

    and i loved the personification you've used with the branches.

    its like you've caught mother nature perfectly within this piece.
    and i like how it shows how much you enjoy it and appreciate it.
    ...maybe the world needs a few more people like yourself. and maybe we could preserve our nature a little better than we have. its kind of sad how we destroy it for petty reasons. more shopping centers here and there more million dollar housing...i dont know. the world isnt quite what it used to be and it will never be the beautiful place it once was. ...anyways this was a great write. i liked it a lot...there was a lot of good descriptions and feelings used in it..

    thanks for sharing!
    | Posted on 2006-03-03 00:00:00 | by vintagepepper | [ Reply to This ]


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