Its down by the river I want to sit
is it here? where i can watch the blue waters ripple
and the pirhana's
and the frog leafs
down by the river bank
I love your aspects. And all your content
And how you grow so tall
with all those colourful vitamins that you eat
The smell so scentful
And the animals, resting
And as they just be what god created as mans alternative
Id love another day by the river
And mother nature with her branches so strong
They curl their skinny arms around the thin air
In the solid summer heat
Oh how I love to see
These coours woven so correctly
Like those greens
And 8 tone browns
i like how you incorporate a few things of nature into this...the colors, the smells, the image of "mother nature", and the animals.
and i loved the personification you've used with the branches.
its like you've caught mother nature perfectly within this piece. and i like how it shows how much you enjoy it and appreciate it. ...maybe the world needs a few more people like yourself. and maybe we could preserve our nature a little better than we have. its kind of sad how we destroy it for petty reasons. more shopping centers here and there more million dollar housing...i dont know. the world isnt quite what it used to be and it will never be the beautiful place it once was. ...anyways this was a great write. i liked it a lot...there was a lot of good descriptions and feelings used in it..