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    dots Submission Name: Everything In Its Right Placedots
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    Author: the apocrypha
    Elite Ratio:    3.37 - 185/192/48
    Words: 34
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsEverything In Its Right Placedots
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    Nothing feels quite like
    The sorcery of adrenalin
    Drowning every thought in red
    Maximising visions
    To fatal prophecies

    But...

    Somehow it will all disappear
    And confused compulsion
    Will be ambition crystal clear




    Submitted on 2006-03-03 16:06:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Poetry is meant to mean somthing to everyone, and be seen in different formats. This spoke to me in a suicidal way, except also the realization that most people with suicidal thoughts never follow through upon their feelings because most emotions come and go. By time one accepts their fate, they realize their potential was never given just to be denied by their own will. <3
    | Posted on 2006-03-03 00:00:00 | by CaptainRogers | [ Reply to This ]
      "The sorcery of adrenalin" is a great line. to me, this is about someone having serious murerous thoughts or foreseeing something horrid. I like the alliteration in the last stanza. It's good to see you back, amy
    | Posted on 2006-03-03 00:00:00 | by cuddledumplin | [ Reply to This ]


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