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    dots Submission Name: a wanted mandots
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    Author: sickly
    Elite Ratio:    3.56 - 545/537/203
    Words: 90
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Description:
       i received an e-mail from noble house in england requesting a poem and although i have used this title before, i wrote something almost entirely new with the hope in mind that noble house will deem it worthy of publication.nevertheless, it has been a while since i have submitted something to this site although i have been writing all the time.and so, here it is.


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    dotsa wanted mandots
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    open your eyes
    you can't deny it
    it' not just a fantasy
    it's something just for me
    as i reign down on thee
    feeling the hours in the music
    bringing it on
    and calling it out
    for years to come
    and for those who are angry
    die hard
    without forever
    one too many wasted sunsets
    one too many for the road
    worded magick in a fevered night
    so strange
    and with such sorrow
    fighting to the end
    a human target
    it's truly what i am
    a wanted man




    Submitted on 2006-03-03 16:23:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      [censored] you gooof!when you stop eating [censored] i'll stop thinking about what i have to do to make sure that you,re dead before noon tomorrow.
    | Posted on 2006-03-05 00:00:00 | by sickly | [ Reply to This ]
      ok here is ur real comment...yeah i couldnt be bothered actauly reading it cuz ur a jerk off but w/e it was good...

    Trevor...~
    | Posted on 2006-03-05 00:00:00 | by goomaster03 | [ Reply to This ]
      i had to stop by and read this i thank you for your comment
    dont get frustrated by human ignorance when people dont comment that means they really dont understand your writers emotion
    me myself i like your posts as i too have these things to write about

    thanx sandman
    | Posted on 2006-03-09 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]


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