This write is terrific You are sharing with your fellow youth that they are not the only ones that feel trapprd where they are now with no escape in sight Knowledge is the secret my friend Rad and listen intently to others Remember What we hear stays in our subconcious forever God Bless Your Friend Ron
Nice. Everything said here made me stop and think about the way I'm living. Wonderful job of getting your point through with a venom glaze bullet. I'd give your write 8.5 out of 10. Spread your words like fire.
HEY GENA! I LOVE U! ok i think u should take out " I feel like a rat" cuz it just doesnt sound write! that line made me feel like eatin cheese! but the rest of it was good and reminded me of something that i would write! i love u! and i want u to be happy! so dont hide in no shell iight! or imma have to break it! somehow! hehe! i love u! ~akaila~ " dont ever be afraid to come to me and cry. Dont ever be afraid to look me in da eye! dont ever be afraid to tell me how u feel cuz ur my gurl and we gotta keep it REAL!"