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    dots Submission Name: Then and Nowdots
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    Author: chaos_flame
    ASL Info:    24/m/ky
    Elite Ratio:    2.77 - 46/79/25
    Words: 134
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 249
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 857



    Description:
       once i had a girl that i thought i loved
    i would give anything to stay by her side
    she was my world and i believed i was hers
    there was nothing that could tear us apart
    i had everything i ever dreamed of
    but then the chaos returns
    she slowly tore me apart
    watching her with her knife
    making me watch the blood
    flow down her arms
    might as well stab me with it
    having her leave me
    for someone one else
    and blaming me for her action
    "you pushed me to do it, this is your fault!"
    thats all i would hear
    god why did you do this to me
    all i wanted was to love you
    but instead you broke me down
    almost killed me
    when you left me alone to die.......

    but that was then and this is now
    i found the girl that i want to be with
    who makes me happy and free
    that i can love and loves me too
    that would never stab me in the back
    treat me like shit and leave me like that
    she is now the one i love
    and your just another voice in my head
    so hear are my final words
    concerning this today......


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    dotsThen and Nowdots
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    Love is lost and love is found
    this is the fate my world revolves around
    to this my destiny is bound

    so much since then has changed
    my feelings distorted and rearranged
    it almost feels staged

    but now everythings is anew
    my love for you was true
    but im starting to forget you

    someone else has taken your place
    to help me forget your face
    and wash away my disgrace

    shes is the one i love above all
    shes the one that i heard call
    before my soul started to fall

    she heard my screams
    where were you?
    she heard my cries
    where were you?
    she wiped away my tears
    where were you?
    she healed my shattered heart
    that was because of you

    by: David Robey




    Submitted on 2006-03-04 01:10:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      very nice! Glad you found someone to mend your broken heart and also glad you could express so wonderfully because it was a pleasure to read.
    | Posted on 2006-03-05 00:00:00 | by tinkerbellsas | [ Reply to This ]
      wow...who's the lucky girl? Im really glad to see that you are getting over CJ. You deserve someone who truly understands the meaning of love...

    CALL ME! :P

    ->Dark Angel
    | Posted on 2006-03-05 00:00:00 | by drk_angl_17 | [ Reply to This ]



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