Dear Duke; You worded this poem very well, and there is nothing that I would dare change in it. You clearly have a strong belief in your topic, and know the exact words to convey your meaning, nice job. Keep up with the Haikus, and writing in general. Very good job. ~~Mykquillion
im not in to hiku and im not sure what this is for..it shows how u feel pretty well but what doest the the us? is that us as in humans in genral...or like hell being the earth..its pretty cool but are hikue sappost to ryme..? idk im stupid..