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    dots Submission Name: Pain is Love, Love is Paindots
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    Author: chaos_flame
    ASL Info:    24/m/ky
    Elite Ratio:    2.77 - 46/79/25
    Words: 95
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 218
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    Bytes: 624



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    dotsPain is Love, Love is Paindots
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    pain is love and love is pain
    always striving for something
    but you gain nothing
    this is always been my life
    suffering and crying everynite
    this torement ihide
    so deep down inside
    where not even i can see
    how much it consumes me
    no one can understand why
    why my soul wants to die
    maybe this my fate
    to be consumed by this hate
    now I'm alone again
    because i dont have you my friend
    my love, my everything
    i will do anything
    just to survive
    after you said goodbye

    By: David Robey




    Submitted on 2006-03-04 09:38:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i liked it..great piece..the flow was good..my fav. part was
    "no one can understand why
    why my soul wants to die"

    I could relate to that the most, how sad of me..anyhows great work keep it up!
    -Lucy-
    | Posted on 2006-03-04 00:00:00 | by rainbowXrazors | [ Reply to This ]
      u spelled everynight wroung...lol no it was really ok...its not amazing but i got the point that ur stugling like me in ur life...i like the part about my every thing...its not that spechil but i still like it...


    Trevor
    | Posted on 2006-03-04 00:00:00 | by goomaster03 | [ Reply to This ]
      Are you in my head?! This is what I've been feeling for quite some time now. So, obviously I love this one. Its mos def about to be one of my favorites. I loved it and I felt it.
    | Posted on 2006-03-04 00:00:00 | by CompletelyME | [ Reply to This ]
      im so so sorry...I know how much it must have killed you when she left you...Believe me, It killed me when I found out her and Zane were [censored]...I thouht I really did love him...but...I found someone else that is true to me...I hope you have too...

    ->Dark Angel
    | Posted on 2006-03-05 00:00:00 | by drk_angl_17 | [ Reply to This ]



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