I loved this! The imagery was amazing...and ur word choice was excellent! The way u used repition in the first and last line gave the poem the mystery and made for a really good ending. It realy callobrated well with the poem.
i liked it..it was a bit confusing, then again i'm not all here today..is this about an ignored child killing him-herself, so then they never existed because they never were, or i don't know..i can't explain it but i get what your saying..keep up the good work ! -Lucy-