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    dots Submission Name: Carry Ondots
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    Author: juss_kriss
    ASL Info:    16/f/canada
    Elite Ratio:    3.86 - 399/443/123
    Words: 220
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 201
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1426



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    dotsCarry Ondots
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    verse 1:
    i thought, that i was over you
    and that, i didn't need you
    cause i'm sick of all the arguing
    but now, i realize i'm back
    right at, the starting line
    waiting only to fall again
    no, no i'm not fine

    chorus:
    i don't, think it's right
    when you, are calling for me
    and i come running ot you
    this is, where we come together
    as if, we've made it forever
    though the ends long come and gone
    still we, we carry on

    verse 2:
    and i, drop all my defences
    as you, step towards me
    with that look in your eye
    you say hey baby come with me
    as i, ignore what's saying no
    as i throw away my pride
    and run right back to you

    chorus

    verse 3:
    why do, i run straight to you
    when i, know what's inside
    when the truth can't be denied
    you hate, all my stupid questions
    i ask, when i don't understand
    when i nee to know what's going on
    please, please say you love me

    chorus x2

    coda:
    do you, agree it isn't right
    when we, always seem to fight
    to everyone who tries to look inside
    but yet we come together
    as if we are still together
    as we carry on




    Submitted on 2006-03-04 13:49:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      You know what? I really hate lyrics that doesn’t have a meaning, it makes the song so banal, but your lyrics (I’ve read more than one) are full of emotions and I’m sure they’ll turn out to be great amazing songs , all I can do is wish you the best of luck you can have.

    have a nice day and happy B.D :)

    ~~drakoniss~~
    | Posted on 2006-06-20 00:00:00 | by drakoniss | [ Reply to This ]
      This is a real good write
    Its great to see you back posting again
    All your wrutes really do have meaning
    That is what I like about them
    God Bless
    Ron
    | Posted on 2006-03-04 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      I think that this was very nice. I think you expressed how confusing love can be at times. I think that you did fine with your flow, and the word choice was good. All in all...a very good song.

    Maggie
    | Posted on 2006-03-05 00:00:00 | by Magnolia Steele | [ Reply to This ]



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