It's interesting, yeah. It's a poem about taking drugs, I guess? It's obvious it has something to do with drugs and the such, but I can't actually tell what. Is it a poem about the temptation and pressure of trying drugs, or maybe the curiosity of it? Or is it a poem about somebody who's been addicted to drugs for a really long time?
It could go either way, if you think about it. Now you've got me thinking, which is actually something that poems and writing do very rarely nowadays.
As for the actual structure of the writing, you could've made it a little neater, as in, you could've given it a more poetic flow than what it had. And maybe rhyming would help it out a little bit too, just to give it more of a poem feel than a journal entry feel.
Either way, it's an okay piece, not bad really, but it could be improved upon.
It was thought provoking though, so that's always good.