My New Love -------------------------------------------
i use to be consumed
by my messed up past
how my happiness would
come and go so fast
nothing would ever
really go my way
things would go wrong
every single day
no matter what
i would do or say
but things seems
different with you
im starting to
feel something true
like things don't bother
me as they use to
i actually seem
truely content with you
you make me feel like
i can do anything
and all my worries
have turn into nothing
that's why i'm glad
you are in my life
to hold you and
kiss you day and night
that why when i
say this and it's true
you make me so happy
and i really do love you
I like the simplicity of it. I can relate, definately. The only thing to make it better would be maybe say how that person makes you content. How are they different from everyone else? Good write.
Baby, I love you and you know it... I just never knew that I made such a difference in your life until now, and not just because of your writing. I see more and more every day. Just don't listen to me half the time ok? *cries* I love you and only you can change that...
this was very cute...it was simple and from the heart which makes it great in my eyes...past heartache always makes a person close them selves off a bit from new love and pther people so good job opening up to this new person
Wow this is great..The emoiton is quite overwhelmeing..I can relate to this piece quite well..I do agree with Haley it would of been better if you described how she makes you content..But other then that it was great..later
This is great! I really like it. I can relate, and i love how it gives the rest of us hurting a little ray of home that someday things will be better. good job!
Submission Name: My New Love
