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this is something that i wrote starting yesterday and finished today.if anyone reads and comments on this, i wrote and posted something yesterday, "a wanted man", that no one commented on and i really think that you should give it a read.anyway, i'll get back to you all very soon.
distortions
i forced myself into history sorry to have taken so long it must have been a bitch while i was gone so come on and love it all i sure know something this is what's been prayed for i'm a product of evolution a risen son a golden rose a dropping tear i loved you good but you loved me not graceless and fading a wild horse a secret from satan somebody's crazy dream for a one and only crazy night borne upon the wind going on 'til never into the darkness |
Submitted on 2006-03-04 21:46:15 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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thats kinda...idk...its great but a lil random...like the rymes u used were pretty good but i think like half way through u just kinda stoped ryming all together..what happend?| | Posted on 2006-03-04 00:00:00 | by goomaster03 | [ Reply to This ] | I dont think you have to rhyme all the way thru for it to be good. This WAS good. I love the line | a wild horse a secret from satan That is pretty. Keep up the good work, you've got skills | Posted on 2006-03-05 00:00:00 | by I_m not Broken | [ Reply to This ] | |
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