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i forced myself into history sorry to have taken so long it must have been a bitch while i was gone so come on and love it all i sure know something this is what's been prayed for i'm a product of evolution a risen son a golden rose a dropping tear i loved you good but you loved me not graceless and fading a wild horse a secret from satan somebody's crazy dream for a one and only crazy night borne upon the wind going on 'til never into the darkness |
thats kinda...idk...its great but a lil random...like the rymes u used were pretty good but i think like half way through u just kinda stoped ryming all together..what happend?| Posted on 2006-03-04 00:00:00 | by goomaster03 | [ Reply to This ] | I dont think you have to rhyme all the way thru for it to be good. This WAS good. I love the line | a wild horse a secret from satan That is pretty. Keep up the good work, you've got skills | Posted on 2006-03-05 00:00:00 | by I_m not Broken | [ Reply to This ] | |