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    dots Submission Name: Last moments of Lifedots
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    Author: chaos_flame
    ASL Info:    24/m/ky
    Elite Ratio:    2.77 - 46/79/25
    Words: 262
    Class/Type: Story/Death
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    dotsLast moments of Lifedots
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    Josh woke up, dazed and confused. The room is pitchback and very small. He noticed there are holes on the floors. There's something in his hand. Its a flashlite and a peice of paper.
    Josh turns its on and looks at the paper. Its a note........

    people live and people die
    some without a reason why
    a few love being alive
    and would do anything to survive

    but most dont appreciate it
    and live there life like shit
    just throw away their gift
    or act like they dont exist

    fill their bodies with death
    even to their last breathe
    out of their free will
    just for a little thrill

    or their life is always the same
    and get sucked into society game
    where nothing real and always fake
    where you give and they take

    this is why i have you here
    to show you something to fear
    to let you feel death is near
    because of your action out there

    you sold death to everyone
    and didnt give a shit, not one
    with no remorse on what you've done
    hell you even thought it was fun

    well your time has come
    and me to have my fun
    so here is a lesson learn
    and its time to burn

    He notices the smell of gas. In the background he hears a sadistic laugh and then a lighter strike. Flames shoots up from the holes. Pain consumes Josh's body and he screams and cries. Ten minutes later he dies.








    Submitted on 2006-03-05 21:31:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      ooh...wow. thats awesome. You should read my poem called Up in Flames...its almost like this...sorta kinda :P You're really good, you know that? :P

    ->Dark Angel
    | Posted on 2006-03-05 00:00:00 | by drk_angl_17 | [ Reply to This ]



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