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    dots Submission Name: The Long Goodbyedots
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    Author: Hip-Hop Honey
    ASL Info:    16/f/canada
    Elite Ratio:    3.51 - 105/86/31
    Words: 266
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 833
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1580



    Description:
       This is a song Mylo wanted me to listen to...I guess this is the way we both feel about your realtionship..Other then the over part


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    dotsThe Long Goodbyedots
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    I know they say if you love somebody
    You should set them free
    But it sure is hard to do
    It sure is hard to do

    I know they say if it donít come back again
    Then itís meant to be
    Those words donít pull me through
    Cause Iím still in love with you

    I spend each day here waiting for a miracle
    Itís just you and me going through the mill
    Climbing up a hill

    Refrain:
    This is a long goodbye
    Somebody tell me why
    Two lovers in love canít make it
    Just what kind of love keeps breaking a heart?
    No matter how hard I try
    I always make you cry
    Come on baby itís over
    Letís face it
    All thatís happening here is a long goodbye

    Sometimes I ask my heart
    Did we really give our love a chance?
    But I know without a doubt
    We turned it inside out
    And if we walked away would it make more sense
    But it tears me up inside
    Just to think we still could try

    How long must we keep running on a carousel?
    Going round and round and never getting anywhere
    On a wing and prayer

    Refrain:
    This is a long goodbye
    Somebody tell me why
    Two lovers in love canít make it
    Just what kind of love keeps breaking a heart?
    No matter how hard I try
    I always make you cry
    Come on baby itís over
    Letís face it
    All thatís happening here is a long goodbye

    A long goodbye
    Whoa




    Submitted on 2006-03-05 22:12:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Again with the lyrics and getting my hopes up that your poems are actully 270 words long, but I read the first part and it is true u never realize what u have uyntil it's gone that's y you need ot let the person you love free to see if they will come back to you in the end too bad I'm too lazy to read the rest of the song but I hope things end up working out for the best with you and Mylo or you and Dylan
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    | Posted on 2006-03-13 00:00:00 | by in_my_suffering | [ Reply to This ]


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