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    dots Submission Name: What Hurts The Mostdots
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    Author: Hip-Hop Honey
    ASL Info:    16/f/canada
    Elite Ratio:    3.51 - 105/86/31
    Words: 272
    Class/Type: Lyrics/BrokenHeart
    Total Views: 900
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1667



    Description:
       This is the best Rascal Flatts song ever !!!!


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    dotsWhat Hurts The Mostdots
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    I can take the rain on the roof of this empty house
    That don't bother me
    I can take a few tears now and then and just let them out
    I'm not afraid to cry every once in a while
    Even though going on with you gone still upsets me
    There are days every now and again I pretend I'm ok
    But that's not what gets me

    What hurts the most
    Was being so close
    And having so much to say
    And watching you walk away
    And never knowing
    What could have been
    And not seeing that loving you
    Is what I was tryin' to do

    It's hard to deal with the pain of losing you everywhere I go
    But I'm doin' It
    It's hard to force that smile when I see our old friends and I'm alone
    Still Harder
    Getting up, getting dressed, livin' with this regret
    But I know if I could do it over
    I would trade give away all the words that I saved in my heart
    That I left unspoken

    What hurts the most
    Is being so close
    And having so much to say
    And watching you walk away
    And never knowing
    What could have been
    And not seeing that loving you
    Is what I was trying to do

    What hurts the most
    Is being so close
    And having so much to say
    And watching you walk away
    And never knowing
    What could have been
    And not seeing that loving you
    Is what I was trying to do

    Not seeing that loving you
    That's what I was trying to do
    Ooohhh....




    Submitted on 2006-03-06 00:09:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I'm not even touching this song I hate country music and Rascle Flatts so I'm not even going to say a thing about this song I'm just going to fill this up to get my comments back up I don't know what ppl see in country music I knwo I might be offending alot of ppl but I just hate it with a passion. I wish your poems were 270 words or longer that's the only thing I noticed

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    | Posted on 2006-03-13 00:00:00 | by in_my_suffering | [ Reply to This ]


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