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    dots Submission Name: thinking of the chosendots
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    Author: ledmerc
    ASL Info:    33 male wherever i am
    Elite Ratio:    2.18 - 3/1/2
    Words: 233
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Society
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       a thank you to all who keep literature alive


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    dotsthinking of the chosendots
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    we have all been placed in certain classes of life
    upper class..i know of none

    middle class: ... i know of some

    lower class:....thats where im from

    so the upper assosciate with no one with the exception of the elite

    the middle class whish they were upper so they could show the rest of the party that ... THEY ARE SOMEONE..

    then theres my class

    the lowwer class
    now not on the topic of financial catagorizing in this class of society,
    but in evrydAY HABITUAL LIVING

    in the lower class we are looked upon as informal beings

    we amount to not one thing but the fact we were born into life and were dealt a bad hand

    i am nobody
    not to confuse you with the insecurity of saying i am nothing, we are very valuable no matter youre classification

    i am nobody

    but the lower class are the literature buffs
    the artsy
    the abstact
    the spontaneous

    we travel
    we take chances
    we are extremists

    after all we are scum in the eyes of the upper class

    we are the chosen

    the chosen by carefree expression
    by writing
    painting
    drawing


    communicating...

    i wrote this right now as it comes because elite writers...
    i was thinking of you

    iwas thinking of
    THE CHOSEN




    Submitted on 2006-03-06 05:49:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      i think that it was really good and that it flowed really well it was deep and was writen well.
    I liked the fact that in a sene you kept it absract .
    keep it up
    | Posted on 2006-03-06 00:00:00 | by lost.within.you | [ Reply to This ]



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