I have sinned
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Just a little something that I wrote at work bored outta my mind.
I have sinned
Forgive me Lord for I have sinned Yes, I went dancing again Started out as the same old story Yet for some reason it never bores me We were moving to the beat Feeling fine, turning up the heat Then there was a slow song She straddled my thigh I loved it Lord I won't lie Oh how her body moved Sensually as she began to grind I then knew it was over My soul had been lost The night was young by far Yet still we left that bar We went to her place For a fall from grace Clothes started coming off Before we even hit the door. It was her fault O' God I didn't want to do it on the floor This was the quickest score To this day Didn't even have any foreplay It was over so quick I thought it was through Until she showed me What her mouth could do By now You could have come down With Your Almighty Powers Telling me to stop Oh God it's true. I would have told you to f*** off I took a tour of her house Always firmly planted She has lovely couches Tables, chairs and a bed Finally it ended Mind shattering release One which never seemed to cease We lay there close On the patio I think Or was it a closet? Anyway Lord I must confess She truly was beautiful With her head upon my chest She whimpered gently Fingers teasing softly Then whispered quietly 'Spank me.' Lord, I've gone once I've done twice You never mentioned I could do round three So surely I took her over my knee Hand striking and stroking As she cried with glee Then once more a tour With her rear afire I think I passed out For I remember not the rest So Lord, this is my sin The reason for my grin Is I would do it several times If I were able Ummm Lord... Are you masturbating again? |
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| If this is "bored out of your mind" I can only imagine what you write when your mind is engaged... I really liked how you put this together, your word choice and the "imagery" in this are excellent and very image provoking... And I really liked your last line...well done Jodans Lisa | Posted on 2006-03-19 00:00:00 | by ravenwolf68 | [ Reply to This ] | holy crap this is freakin long. | but brilliant indeed. She has lovely couches this was an awesome line...you have wonderful poetry and lots and lots of talent. | Posted on 2006-03-07 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ] | I must say that this got a laugh out of me, it's pretty funny- especially the last 2 lines. I think your idea and most of your lines are great, but it gets a little awkward at times. But I'd say you've done a good job for a 'bored time' piece, good humor ^-^ | | Posted on 2006-03-06 00:00:00 | by lesser_threat | [ Reply to This ] | wow | this poem really cheered me up i've been going through a lot and i needed a nice laugh Thanks lol i agree with lesser_threat it was a lil awkward at some lines but it was still a great job | Posted on 2006-03-06 00:00:00 | by James Wiffy | [ Reply to This ] | |
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