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I have sinned


Author: Jodans
ASL Info:    25/M/Vancouver, WA
Elite Ratio:    4.24 - 34 /38 /9
Words: 349
Class/Type: Poetry /Passion
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Just a little something that I wrote at work bored outta my mind.


I have sinned



Forgive me Lord for I have sinned
Yes, I went dancing again
Started out as the same old story
Yet for some reason it never bores me

We were moving to the beat
Feeling fine, turning up the heat
Then there was a slow song
She straddled my thigh
I loved it Lord
I won't lie

Oh how her body moved
Sensually as she began to grind
I then knew it was over
My soul had been lost

The night was young by far
Yet still we left that bar
We went to her place
For a fall from grace

Clothes started coming off
Before we even hit the door.
It was her fault O' God
I didn't want to do it on the floor
This was the quickest score
To this day
Didn't even have any foreplay

It was over so quick
I thought it was through
Until she showed me
What her mouth could do

By now You could have come down
With Your Almighty Powers
Telling me to stop
Oh God it's true.
I would have told you to f*** off

I took a tour of her house
Always firmly planted
She has lovely couches
Tables, chairs and a bed

Finally it ended
Mind shattering release
One which never seemed to cease

We lay there close
On the patio I think
Or was it a closet?
Anyway Lord I must confess
She truly was beautiful
With her head upon my chest

She whimpered gently
Fingers teasing softly
Then whispered quietly
'Spank me.'

Lord, I've gone once
I've done twice
You never mentioned
I could do round three

So surely I took her over my knee
Hand striking and stroking
As she cried with glee

Then once more a tour
With her rear afire
I think I passed out
For I remember not the rest

So Lord, this is my sin
The reason for my grin
Is I would do it several times
If I were able
Ummm Lord...
Are you masturbating again?




Submitted on 2006-03-06 12:19:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  If this is "bored out of your mind" I can only imagine what you write when your mind is engaged...

I really liked how you put this together, your word choice and the "imagery" in this are excellent and very image provoking...

And I really liked your last line...well done Jodans

Lisa
| Posted on 2006-03-19 00:00:00 | by ravenwolf68 | [ Reply to This ]
  holy crap this is freakin long.
but brilliant indeed.

She has lovely couches

this was an awesome line...you have wonderful poetry and lots and lots of talent.
| Posted on 2006-03-07 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]
  I must say that this got a laugh out of me, it's pretty funny- especially the last 2 lines. I think your idea and most of your lines are great, but it gets a little awkward at times. But I'd say you've done a good job for a 'bored time' piece, good humor ^-^
| Posted on 2006-03-06 00:00:00 | by lesser_threat | [ Reply to This ]
  wow

this poem really cheered me up i've been going through a lot and i needed a nice laugh
Thanks
lol i agree with lesser_threat it was a lil awkward at some lines but it was still a great job
| Posted on 2006-03-06 00:00:00 | by James Wiffy | [ Reply to This ]


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