Description: Just a short little poem i wrote because its a mellow night with nothing to do. Its not much but I guess thats kind of the point. I dont normally like to use stanzas but i think it worked best with this. At first I wrote it without the last stanza but I thought it sounded unfisinshed so i added the last part. Does it sound better without it? I didnt have any other ideas to incorporate so I just left it the way it is. And I decided to do without puncuation for now. Let me know what you think i guess.
Bottom of the Sea -------------------------------------------
Such a quiet night
An obligation to be alone
Who would have known
It would be me
All life out of sight
For what I call a home
In a house like a stone
At the bottom of the sea
So I'll say goodnight
To no one on the phone
And the program that was shown
On the unplugged TV
Hope you're alright
Wish I wasnt alone
Cant wait til you're home
Are you thinking of me
something one can fathom...a little pun it seems like that when one feels alone. it doesn't matter if one is submersed in a sea of people, one can still feel isolated and alone even more
i suffer deep bouts of depression due to my childhood and often feel alone and unloved, but if i don't isolate myself and make it worse i get over it much faster knowing that i do have friends that truely love me and give me emotional support that i never had from my parents since my mom left when i was two and well, my dad wasn't exactly the supportive type
more like the do or die kind of guy during my childhood
Submission Name: Bottom of the Sea
