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Silent death screams


Author: MysterydarkPoet
ASL Info:    20/f/Aust
Elite Ratio:    3.13 - 157 /295 /173
Words: 198
Class/Type: Poetry /Alone
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AHH guys comment!!!


Silent death screams



It lingers oh yes it duz

This is funny

No one ever comments!! This is soo hiserical yes i used a fabulous name for a call out for people to comment on my poems

but how the f.ck else was i supposed to get u attention

dont comment on this get out there on comment on fabulkous poetry

dont judge a poem by its title

u might just find

what u were looking for behind the worlds worst title of the eyar- i mean who gets all the stinking comments


i get next to none on mine

and half the time

my poems are actually pretty ok-

i was gonna put a poem here

but stuff yas

i dont see why i should wen everyone reads and dusnt comment- dont just read

if u didnt like it

say why u didnt

or if u did

say why

i know half ya's cant be bothered

but if ur on this sight

and u can be btohered reading it

then god damn

COMMENT!!




Submitted on 2006-03-07 04:00:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  SEE even I comment!

SEE SEE SEE

i did comment i think people read it if everyone else has commented so i am commenting

hello

this was very true


everyone should bloody well comment


AHH!


bye
| Posted on 2006-03-07 00:00:00 | by MysterydarkPoet | [ Reply to This ]
  i dont see why i should wen everyone reads and dusnt comment- dont just read

if u didnt like it

say why u didnt

or if u did

say why

i know half ya's cant be bothered

but if ur on this sight

and u can be btohered reading it

then god damn

COMMENT!!
I commented too!!!i agree ppl should comment on this bye
| Posted on 2006-03-07 00:00:00 | by MysteriousPoet | [ Reply to This ]
  What the f?#@. Ok, wow, that was definantly original. That poem was crazy. hEY IF IF THEY DON'T COMMENT, Oh well, let them not comment. It's gonna be on them. WELL, what can i say about your poem. It was definantly original and i'm trying to stop From laughing 'cause im in class. Well(im just answering the questions at the bottom) it was very clear and i don't think you could have done it better. There u go, a nice lonnnnnnnnng comment from daughterofdeath to MysterydarkPoet.

~*~katara~*~
| Posted on 2006-03-07 00:00:00 | by daughterofdeath | [ Reply to This ]
  My friend
This is a very good rant
If people wish to comment on your poetry they will
I understand that you may feel that many people dont comment on your poetry but
Look at it this way
When someone does comment they are making an attemt to develop a friendship
Why not work on that one comment and make a lifelong friend
Be Positive
Trust me thats the key
God Bless
Ron
| Posted on 2006-03-07 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
  yeah...i wish i got more comments too. haha i'll commetn on this...um very orignal. i like the tone...lol. my interpretation is that you want more comments. well here's one for ya. haha. nice. peace out
| Posted on 2006-03-08 00:00:00 | by beth freese | [ Reply to This ]


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