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    dots Submission Name: Wonderingdots
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    Author: luckyms20
    ASL Info:    16/F/MI
    Elite Ratio:    3.47 - 106/105/64
    Words: 120
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
    Total Views: 188
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 742



    Description:
       This poem is about how I constantly wonder about so many things and I'm never satisfied. I see a person and I wonder what it would be like to lead the kind of life that they do and be friends with the same people and go through the same things. Sometimes I feel like my life is fading away wondering about questions that can never be anwered.


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    dotsWonderingdots
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    A new person passes me everday,
    And everyday I wonder,
    What is that person thinking about?
    And I wonder what it must be like to be in their shoes,
    The world has many kinds,
    But unfortunately, I am only one kind,
    The kind that wonders constantly,
    And wants to know the world.
    Sometimes I feel so ignorant,
    I can talk all I want,
    But in the end, I am only one person,
    And no one person can solve the universe,
    I wish I were the kind that feels older than their time,
    Unfortunately, I am only the kind of person,
    That walks along in an empty life,
    Wondering about the many retorical questions,
    That still need to be answered.




    Submitted on 2006-03-07 09:25:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      nice work! i do love ur writing's very essence c",)

    i myself was a wonderer like you... so i guess this one goes into my fave list!

    *thumbs up*

    ---> Jane

    | Posted on 2006-03-07 00:00:00 | by jane_kiedis | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this one... it shows that you are an observant person, and super aware of the people around you and their feelings. Its a tough thing to explain in writing, but when I read this poem, I knew exactly what you meant, because I am the exact same way. Its qualities like that which help us become writers. Observing the people and places around you and getting into their shoes and understanding why people do the things they do, thats the essence of being a writer. Getting into the minds of others and yourself in a perfect way. Kudos, excellent write!
    | Posted on 2006-03-07 00:00:00 | by BreakAndFall | [ Reply to This ]
      And no one person can solve the universe

    I think this is the best part about your poem, we all wonder and we all get trapped in endless swirls of agony over our unanswered questions...but we have to remember, like you said in your line no one person can solve the universe. I think this is a very accurately put poem


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    | Posted on 2006-03-07 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]
      This is a good peom. it got me thinking even more now. The way you made the life of the person is great. You got the person seeming like they is bored all the time and constantly wondering about others and other thing. I love it, so keep up the good work.
    | Posted on 2006-03-07 00:00:00 | by Freaky DA | [ Reply to This ]



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