'if you can catch me i'm yours' she teased
her heart lay inside his hands
'if you can walk away i'll let you go' he whispered
and she turned over and smelled his cologne
omg...I love it...I absolutely adore this piece...it's the best that I've read on Elite in like a week *hugs*...thank you so much...you dont boast with unnecessary literary devices...you dont try to display knowledge of confusing language by tossing in a lot of big words...it's not long and drawn out...just short, sweet, and to the point...I absolutely adore it...a new favourite! Reveries
Well this is a niece poem. Its the shortest i ever read. But it was great. I didn't have no problem reading it or nothing good job and keep up the good work.
I think a guy's cologne is probably the hardest thing in the world to walk away from. It's so f*cked up, but I'll be just so irritated and ready to get Tony completely out of my mind, and he'll stand close, or walk by, and I'll smell him, and it's all over. This was great!
very short, but theres nothing left to say! i lvoe it! i used to have a boyfriend that wore a certain type of cologne and tahts exactly how i felt about it! we broke up, but i still buy that cologne for myself. great job!
Submission Name: Cologne
