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    dots Submission Name: Colognedots

    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    27/f/alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 1752/1517/481
    Words: 35
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 726
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 221

       I like this because I think it is something that girls can relate to...don't we love to smell our boys cologne?!

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    'if you can catch me i'm yours' she teased
    her heart lay inside his hands
    'if you can walk away i'll let you go' he whispered
    and she turned over and smelled his cologne

    Submitted on 2006-03-07 09:50:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      omg...I love it...I absolutely adore this piece...it's the best that I've read on Elite in like a week *hugs*...thank you so much...you dont boast with unnecessary literary devices...you dont try to display knowledge of confusing language by tossing in a lot of big words...it's not long and drawn out...just short, sweet, and to the point...I absolutely adore it...a new favourite!
    | Posted on 2006-03-07 00:00:00 | by reveries | [ Reply to This ]
      Well this is a niece poem. Its the shortest i ever read. But it was great. I didn't have no problem reading it or nothing good job and keep up the good work.
    | Posted on 2006-03-07 00:00:00 | by Freaky DA | [ Reply to This ]
      I think a guy's cologne is probably the hardest thing in the world to walk away from. It's so f*cked up, but I'll be just so irritated and ready to get Tony completely out of my mind, and he'll stand close, or walk by, and I'll smell him, and it's all over. This was great!
    | Posted on 2006-03-07 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]
      very short, but theres nothing left to say! i lvoe it! i used to have a boyfriend that wore a certain type of cologne and tahts exactly how i felt about it! we broke up, but i still buy that cologne for myself. great job!
    | Posted on 2006-03-07 00:00:00 | by sussysabaslice | [ Reply to This ]
      This one's pretty cute :) Short and sweet. It expresses virtues of men and women sooo simply. Nice :)

    Apparently I have to write more, and more just to take up space for taking space is what I do in space.
    | Posted on 2006-03-08 00:00:00 | by Shaqua1973 | [ Reply to This ]

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