Description: It hurts to think.. to dream.. to imagine.. it hurts more to not think about you with me..
Fade Black -------------------------------------------
so I fall back to the
old method of life
solitude.. no one in
no more wasting time
waiting for the tears
to race through
cleanse me like
acid no evidence
my memories
fade black
snapped back
to reality
icy truth
of empty words
was it just the
voices in my
head turning
on me..did I
really hear
you, in all
your beauty
twisten the truth to feel this good
so you broke me down
played with my ghosts
dared me to smile
while you were lurking
underneath a mask
twisten me around your finger
I gave no hesitation
and I only have me to blame
sitting her alone
without clarity
just another wasted day
I wish I could
just turn out the
lights ......
sit in the
dark and
meditate
get lost in
the shadows
of my pride
paste the
truth on
the walls
to remind me
I can shake
this in awhile
and so I'm
left with your
walking
away..
nothing
left to do
no choice
to see if
what we
had was real..
and your scent
is what
still shades
my pillow
but that I can
wash away
some day.
oh so damn good.......... awesome! seriously, i almost dont' have anything to say. ok, here it is, i don't have the words to compliment this cause it really just kinda took my breath away......there are a few parts which, if you want to know, i think should have some minor changes, but i'll tell you if you ask. but otherwise its powerful and its perfect.
this one is pretty good. i can tell u really miss this person. the short lines worked really well for u in this one. it sux when u break up with somebody but for some reason u can't shake the feeling that u still belong together
Unbelieveble poem, I can't believe how good it is. Well, I feel the same way, and I do, close the lights off and meditate...Great poem keep it up and I am looing forwards seeing your work...
Submission Name: Fade Black
