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    dots Submission Name: youll seedots
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    Author: annezah
    ASL Info:    17/f/long island
    Elite Ratio:    2.39 - 13/13/15
    Words: 239
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Angry
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    ....before i start this is something i wrote to my boyfriend who is now my ex we broke up today all because i told and cofessed to my teacher that he hits me.....

    is it wrong to die?
    staring at what life has brought you to,
    is it wrong to want to cry?
    since it seems like he doesnt want you.

    heres something else i scribbled


    she wants you
    i have you
    she flirts
    i notice
    im not stupid
    nor blind
    every english class your hers
    and yet i still dont know what goes on
    you hurt me bad
    she hurt me worse
    and its pathetic....

    oh since i havent told you about this every english class (mike) my boyfriend is flirted by this other girl maddie who knows i am going out with him for a year now. and its really weird because i never know what goes on but even when im there shell blow him kisses and it scares me because on his (myspace) if you know what that is she writes that she loves him. and every time i try to talk to mike about it he hits me. its just not fair. can i get any feed back from someone to tell me if what i did telling my teacher was the right thing to dO? should i have let him go? im really not sure




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      i don't know like how this has been but i putting my imput in anyway. I think that its good that you told someone and let him go hes not a real man if he thinks it right to hit a women. he was the one in the wrong not you anyway yeah -jess- sorry if this is late i liked the title so i decided to take a look -jess-
    | Posted on 2006-05-08 00:00:00 | by gothicgirl | [ Reply to This ]
      yes its a good thing that u let him go thats bullcrap u dont let any guy or person put der hands on u! and u should tell the police cuz dats just wrong if that person even cared about u at all dey would never lay there hands on u! READ
    | Posted on 2006-03-19 00:00:00 | by trapt | [ Reply to This ]
      It's wrong to hit the person your supposed to love and care about. If he did care about you at all he would have never hit you. I believe you did the right thing. You are lucky, you got out before it could have possibly gotten worse. Dont think you did wrong. He was wrong.

    -bloody-
    | Posted on 2006-03-07 00:00:00 | by _bloody_kiss_ | [ Reply to This ]
      welll its right of u to tell on him
    u shoulda dumped him the fisrt time he hit u
    dont let nobody treat u like that
    mike is a jerk
    dont feel any remorse 4 him or anything
    if he hit u
    well u dont need him
    cuz u better then that
    and its not rong to cry

    a che voule, non macano modi
    Queeen Darknesss of the Grim Draco
    | Posted on 2006-03-07 00:00:00 | by darkness | [ Reply to This ]
      Hey its evident he's a total jerk...Move on..Know you're beautiful...At the end of it all always remember nobody can let you down without you wanting it...SO get a grip...Kick him out..You deserve more...Your poem speaks volumes of the agony you're going through, you know it yourself that its not right, so act on it...
    | Posted on 2006-03-08 00:00:00 | by jyots | [ Reply to This ]



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