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    dots Submission Name: Until Our Fairer Returnsdots
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    Author: Desser
    ASL Info:    20
    Elite Ratio:    3.83 - 89/95/44
    Words: 171
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 195
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    dotsUntil Our Fairer Returnsdots
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    This place is no shield
    It's not good nor evil
    It's the world all around
    The very thing which was first created

    It binds us as one
    Sharing that which we are
    And only one can stand
    For out true ownership
    For most of us were stolen

    Taken by the prince of darkness
    Deceived by his servents
    Possessed with a poison
    That was consumed in a small drop
    From a honey vine.

    It's not over or finished for our Master
    The One who can claim us all His
    He proved his love and sacrifice
    And with that sacrifice
    He strives to win us back

    He knocks at our door everyday
    It's our choice to answer
    If we do choose to do so
    We must cling to His word
    Cling to it as long and hard as we can

    For as long as it takes
    Believe in Him
    Know Him
    Trust Him
    He will save you

    This is our shield for now
    Until our Fairer returns




    Submitted on 2006-03-07 15:02:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is a well written religious poem. I believe in God, but I don't believe in some of the Bible.
    So I put all my trust in God himself when I want his help or to know something. I have to say though I'm not very religious, but this was a good write. Continue you work!
    | Posted on 2006-03-08 00:00:00 | by Draigon | [ Reply to This ]



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