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    dots Submission Name: The Addictiondots
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    Author: Aelfled
    ASL Info:    15/girl/Missouri
    Elite Ratio:    3.72 - 58/48/18
    Words: 197
    Class/Type: Misc/Sorry
    Total Views: 211
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1242



    Description:
       My reputation here is going down hill. I'm a player. Heartbreaker. Bad girl. Dangerous. Tease. Flirt. You name it.
    This is sorta my "ode" to all the poor guys I've played in the last few years. I'm sorry, yet I'm not sorry. I'm addicted to breaking hearts whether it be just a glance their direction than the cold shoulder, or the whole 9-yards. I'm trying to quit and I will succeed. I will.


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    dotsThe Addictiondots
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    I'm so very sorry
    I never meant to hurt you
    To me it was just a game
    I played with your heart
    And forever I'll be to blame

    It was wrong of me, I know
    I'm sorry for your heart
    I broke it cleanly down the center
    I left it to be scarred

    How could you not have known what was coming?
    Hadn't you heard my reputation of player?
    Why didn't you turn and run?
    Did you think you could change me?

    I never meant to break your heart so thoroughly
    Maybe just a small crack down the center
    I never meant to plunge that knife so deeply
    Even if it was just emotionally stabbed

    I would quit if I could
    But this breaking hearts is my addiction
    I try to hold off completely
    But I keep falling back in

    I'm stuck in this rut
    I'm so very sorry
    Soon you'll heal
    I'll just be a harsh memory
    It'll only be a smoothed scar you will soon feel

    So don't give up
    I promise my nature won't win
    I have to stop breaking hearts
    I have to stop this hurtful addiction!




    Submitted on 2006-03-07 18:45:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      wow...i love it. you put your heart into it. this may sound sexist, but usually this is something a guy apologizes for (haha). "I never meant to break your heart so thoroughly
    Maybe just a small crack down the center" taht was my favorite line...GREAT job! keep it up
    | Posted on 2006-03-07 00:00:00 | by sussysabaslice | [ Reply to This ]



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