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Author:	nsc
Elite Ratio:	2.8 - 53/37/14
Words:	149

Class/Type:	Poetry/Love
Total Views:	244
Average Vote:	4.0000
Bytes:	929

Description:
I want to know what people think, or how they feel when they have read this.

Birds That Soar dots

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Sorry man, I understand how you feel.

Do you? I loved her, I feel lost.

Yeah, but things happen, sometimes it doesn't work out. Who knows?

Who knows? What kind of explanation is that?
I gave her my heart, my soul.

Sometimes, that's not enough man. Sometimes it takes something that you just couldn't give her. Sometimes there has to be a conection that goes beyond explanation.
The heart ain't something you can touch or feel, but it gives you great pain or great joy. And it isn't just your heart man, it's her heart too. The heart is like...... it's like birds that soar man. It searches, it just hangs there till it finds what it's looking for and then it swoops down and grabs on. Sometimes it catches what it wants, sometimes it doesn't.
Yeah........ birds that soar man. That's what love. is.

Submitted on 2006-03-07 22:28:01 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  ummm.Boring kind of. It's not like my Bubble Head Play but, its good for love stricken people. I like the way you choose your words. Overall: Not bad!
| Posted on 2009-04-16 00:00:00 | by wolfgurl830 | [ Reply to This ]
  hmmmm...
this was very interesting. At first I had this picture of 2 men smoking pot and talking about love.. but at the end I could tell there was something more to.
the way you portray your thoughts very lightly and don't twist your meaning around words most can't comprehend is a breath of fresh are in my lungs. So this is more then two hippies rambling about love this is more like an everyday discovery. One of those profound things that sometimes you stumble on in life. As for making more...go ahead...
I would like to read some more...
as for using the word AINT in one of your works again. DO NOT...it's such an ugly ugly word...(maybe its just me..lol)

hope this helps you a little,
Swanne
| Posted on 2006-03-25 00:00:00 | by Swanne | [ Reply to This ]
  i really love this, the sentiment, the delivery, everything. it is a very wise observation, and respectful, in my eyes. full of understanding, honesty, and compassion. you manage to paint differing perspectives, in one very simple and gentle picture. without judgement, and a very open heart. beautifully communicated observations on life and love. deceptively simple. refreshingly original, yep pure poetry.

kind of reminds me of the big lebowski. you know, the dude. that sort of style. a king in fool's levis. makes me smile and dare to love a little more. freely.
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| Posted on 2006-03-08 00:00:00 | by mamukami | [ Reply to This ]
  i like the way you conveyed the thought. i think this is a poem a lot of people can relate to including me and that's one of the things that makes it good...plus i like the style you wrote it in.
| Posted on 2006-03-08 00:00:00 | by only_a_dreamX | [ Reply to This ]

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