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Author:	nuttyginna
Elite Ratio:	2.58 - 24/22/12
Words:	97

Class/Type:	Misc/Misc
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As the poem says-I'M BORED!! I have nothing to do at the moment, so....here we are!

Bored

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This is a poem
just to show
how bored I really am
I don't know
what I should do
Eat a sandwich and jam?
No I don't like bread
I don't like butter
Perhaps I should fall asleep
In the playground gutter?
No. I don't like the rain
I don't like the sun
Perhaps I should just be bored
until the day is done?
Yes. I like the night
I like the bats
Perhaps I should go
and feed my cats?
I'm just so bored
I don't know
What will I do
I just DON'T KNOW!!

Submitted on 2006-03-08 06:59:05 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  tihs is so sweet, and it really shows the absolute agony of being bored. we've all felt so, i think....
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| Posted on 2006-03-08 00:00:00 | by ParLon | [ Reply to This ]
  sounds like you couldnt think of anything else to write... lol. but its also cool that you can make something out of nothing... but being bored is awful so why not make a poem about it... good job and keep up the good work.

-bloody-
| Posted on 2006-03-08 00:00:00 | by _bloody_kiss_ | [ Reply to This ]
  I see this more as a song than as a poem. Some of your rhymes seem a little forced but those rhymes are the most outstanding.
| Posted on 2006-06-05 00:00:00 | by Marge | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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