Im dying...
or at least I wish...
I dont know anything anymore...
Everything is falling to pieces... everything.
All alone...
I wont be missed...
Im shattered...
I need peace...
But Im afraid...
But it wont be much longer now...
it was a good write however there is somthing missing in the last three lines. the end was too sudden. you should write " i am afraid" insted of "but i am afraid" and you should add another line before the last line because altough it says it all there seems to be somthing missing
good job hun! this is a good piece! i agree with bloody kiss! i like ur writin bcz its short and explains everything thats goin on! i really can relate to ur writing! good joB! ~akaila~
Submission Name: Peace...
