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    dots Submission Name: Rains of Renewaldots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 42
    Class/Type: Prose/Nature
    Total Views: 672
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    Bytes: 301



    Description:
       a very couple of wet weeks in Northern Cali but "IT's" so green now and alive with new life

    Enjoy life!
    love,peace,joy&smilez 2 share
    tif


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    dotsRains of Renewaldots
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    The last winter storms
    drenched the land

    Glowing
    Revealing
    Everything
    Enlightened
    New

    &

    Love
    Innocence
    GOD
    Human
    Touch

    Reflected

    All ~*~




    Submitted on 2006-03-08 18:00:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Hmmm. This is the second one today I've read that involved rain, however the first one that states "GOD", as opposed to it. Just being observational, I guess. It's ok, but the second stanza doesn't match up with the first.
    | Posted on 2006-04-13 00:00:00 | by dismentled | [ Reply to This ]
      I liked this piece, made me think of new beginnings from something cleansing, which goes right along with the matters going on in my life right now.
    I feel this is a piece you could certainly expand on. (But it is also nice how it is.)
    Thanks for sharing. First write I have read here. Take care! -Scarlet
    | Posted on 2006-07-20 00:00:00 | by scarlet07 | [ Reply to This ]
      Green light, meaning spring is here?
    This is a bright and smiley poem and I enjoyed reading it.
    Letting the rain wash over us.. renewing our spirit.. after the dull grayness of winter has past.

    Nice!
    ~Sandra
    | Posted on 2006-03-11 00:00:00 | by Intricate1 | [ Reply to This ]
      
    Very nice write, and simple, not much too it, I guess thats the point. I would love to read this longer, Still this is a great piece!
    *Keep up the good work*

    Singlerose:)
    | Posted on 2006-03-09 00:00:00 | by SingleRose | [ Reply to This ]
      I commented on this once, but it has dissapeared.

    GREEN LIGHT - I saw the conection right away !

    Another lovely little piece from you - Lady Of The Land !
    | Posted on 2006-03-09 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      YEAY IM FIRST~ again i like ur style of writing thx again for teaching me the pic thing yeah this is cool how u just listed alot of really emotionfull words ... i still dont think "god" should get capd but thats not my place it was good up to the religoius aspect of it...and u know what i didnt know i knew half the words i just used ur really helping me...


    Trevor.../.~
    | Posted on 2006-03-08 00:00:00 | by goomaster03 | [ Reply to This ]
      YEAY IM FIRST~ again i like ur style of writing thx again for teaching me the pic thing yeah this is cool how u just listed alot of really emotionfull words ... i still dont think "god" should get capd but thats not my place it was good up to the religoius aspect of it...and u know what i didnt know i knew half the words i just used ur really helping me...


    Trevor.../.~
    | Posted on 2006-03-08 00:00:00 | by goomaster03 | [ Reply to This ]
      YEAY IM FIRST~ again i like ur style of writing thx again for teaching me the pic thing yeah this is cool how u just listed alot of really emotionfull words ... i still dont think "god" should get capd but thats not my place it was good up to the religoius aspect of it...and u know what i didnt know i knew half the words i just used ur really helping me...


    Trevor.../.~
    | Posted on 2006-03-08 00:00:00 | by goomaster03 | [ Reply to This ]


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