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    dots Submission Name: Let it all godots
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    Author: intoxicated411
    ASL Info:    14/f/earth
    Elite Ratio:    2.38 - 45/60/28
    Words: 172
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 148
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    dotsLet it all godots
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    Come on
    Come on
    Its time to start breathing
    Even if their words are deceiving.

    Keep it real
    Keep it cool
    Now is not the time to obey the rules.

    Let your heart find its way home
    Where it can show
    Whatever you want it to
    The real truth
    All the truth
    Dont let them tell you when to move
    And when to let yourself go.

    She hears her mothers flatline
    As she sits by her hospital bed
    No one could ever know
    How much pain was in that first tear
    She had just faced her worst fear.

    He walks out of his room
    His dad is on the couch
    Beer bottles surround him
    and hes passed out

    He calls 9-1-1
    And waits in the bathroom
    Until he hears the loud sirens tragic rushing
    Hes not leaving his safe-house
    And the blades that surround him.

    Now you tell me what you want to show.
    until its too late
    And you let it all go.




    Submitted on 2006-03-08 19:57:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      loved the line "how much pain was in that first tear" but this poem jumps around alot which i know is the point but its hard to read evne thru that i liked it alot...
    | Posted on 2006-03-09 00:00:00 | by muhammed | [ Reply to This ]
      i loved the line "how much pain was in that first tear" but this poem jumps around alot which i know is the point but its hard to read evne thru that i liked it alot...
    | Posted on 2006-03-08 00:00:00 | by Amanda Lynn | [ Reply to This ]



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