wow... this is reall good. u have a talent. i love the way the poem flowed. It made me feel a pity for the person u talk about. like she is trash or something. I have seen many poems with the same them a this but this is the best do far..well done.
This poem was veryt deep. I liked how you just made this person to be the most dirty person in the world. And how you described everything in great detail. This poem i liked from the beginig to the end. I wll reading so more of you poetry. You did a real good jog and you are very talented.