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    dots Submission Name: on fire verse 3dots

    Author: maninthemirror
    ASL Info:    17/m/arkansas
    Elite Ratio:    2.64 - 224/318/109
    Words: 146
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
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    dotson fire verse 3dots

    I"m ready to role
    got a fully packed bowl
    O.Z., can't control me
    we ready to be, but bitch, you snitchin on me
    never faded, can't control little bitches
    but I'm the king, I"m all about consequences
    this post shit is cheap, like "thugs" in the chatrooms//
    most don't know shit, got heads busted in highschool bathrooms
    the aberrant kings fail to bring drama to the table//
    had enough of that already, and my mind is unable
    to take what you have given me, and roll with the blunt//
    punches, excuse me I tend get my words mixed up
    snitches are recieving no respect from me//
    I can't stand to be around a fucking coward, or a thieve
    with the AK, I spray, replace each tooth with a bullet//
    you ain't worth shit, I cock the trigger and pull it

    chorus till beat fades

    Submitted on 2006-03-08 22:18:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      man this [censored] was hot. the lines about the chatrooms and bathrooms were cool but they had some other really good ones too.

    to take what you have given me, and roll with the blunt//
    punches, excuse me I tend get my words mixed up

    i really liked those lines too. good job man
    | Posted on 2006-05-30 00:00:00 | by young p | [ Reply to This ]
      this post [censored] is cheap, like "thugs" in the chatrooms//
    most don't know [censored], got heads busted in highschool bathrooms

    those lines were tight as [censored]. this one was alright but those lines stood out a lot to me. u love rapping about using AKs don't u?
    | Posted on 2006-03-12 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]

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