Lone wolf
of the pack.
He'll fight beside
or watch your back.
Adamantium claws
and skeletal frame.
Only one female
made his heart tame.
Keen sense of smell
that's always sure.
Regenerative powers
so he can endure.
Military training
for extra might.
For Wolverine,
this x-men knight.
Well, I'm glad I have kids or I wouldn't have understood this at all. LOL
These kind of pieces are purely theme driven and you've done a good job with that. As far as I know, the characterization is accurate. Your rhyme and flow are good.
All of this is a pretty shallow analysis, but I guess there really isn't anything real deep to get into.
Steve
ps. I just showed it to my X-Men loving son. He iinsisted that I print it out and now he's running about the neighborhood sharing with his friends.
Nah I'm joking...I'm a DC baby, but again this was fun. A dedication to wolverine - you don't see that much. As well as listing his powers and making it all rhyme, that's cool. One thing I'd change is the last line, make this x-men knight to "the" x-men knight - I think it gives it more of a predominant feel, stating he is the knight - when saying this, it's as though you give a shout out to the other ones, putting Logan on their level. Anyhow - if you didn't change it, it'd still be tight.
Submission Name: Wolverine
