Thats really cool but short... maybe you can work on it... i like it a lot, and short isn't always bad.read my poem call "Heart" it might insipre you to enlarge your poem.
Tanted hate, eh? Why so? Why is love good? Why is love great? Why is this so short of a poem? If you wanna call it a poem. I think I'm gonna hafta be a little "not me" with this one. Where is this piece? Is it unfinished? Is it just a random "whatever" poem? Seriously, tho, what's up with it? Can there be more? I think so.
Surprisingly, but not in a bad way, short. You got to the point. Which is good, because some artistrs get so caught up in teh language that they forget the point they're trying to get across...although I suppose that, too, could be interesting. I dunno. Do you mean tainted, though? Rae
Nice piece put together, however it lacks the essence. But I do agree nobody has been able to really define this complex emotion...Its a nice effort all the same. I hope to write about Love someday when I'nm ready...
Submission Name: what love is to a broken heart
